Started to take things light, Since last night. Do u think I deserve this pain, this bane? A chance I deserve, as love is what I preserve. But I'm at the end of the road, a flight I'm gonna board, which will take me abroad, far far away from you.
This is such as great blog and I found you from The Poetry Palace and glad that I stopped by here to read your thoughts and wonderful poems thanks for sharing http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/
The right decision taken.A life can be lived once and its good to move away. Glad to have stopped here from poetry palace and to have read such true ideas.
And as I board my flight, at the end of my road, Stands a sun,still bright as day, perhaps,I'll meld into it, For in death i could be finally bright, With joy,and sad not in slight.
These are some lines i thought up after reading your poem. Too good!
I'm so glad I found your blog. I'm stopping by from the A to Z challenge and I look forward to reading more from you
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ReplyDeleteMakes me think..short and nice!
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That do we need to always harbor pain when we talk about loving??
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very beautiful.
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ReplyDeleteA farewell... well done!
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ReplyDeleteNicely written. I like the flow of this one.
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ReplyDeleteRelationship break up? Those are always tough!
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This is such as great blog and I found you from The Poetry Palace and glad that I stopped by here to read your thoughts and wonderful poems thanks for sharing
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Ann LeFlore: Thank you.. Means a lot..
ReplyDeleteThe right decision taken.A life can be lived once and its good to move away. Glad to have stopped here from poetry palace and to have read such true ideas.
ReplyDeleteanjum artwriter: Thank you.. But, have never been in relationship before to do such things.. its just my thoughts..
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ReplyDeleteReally lovely piece. Unfortunately I had to keep reloading the page and reading it in snippets as my laptop decided to hide the poem itself
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Very good. Ends on a note of anticipation for a new adventure. Enjoyed reading.
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ReplyDeleteAnd as I board my flight,
ReplyDeleteat the end of my road,
Stands a sun,still bright as day,
perhaps,I'll meld into it,
For in death i could be finally bright,
With joy,and sad not in slight.
These are some lines i thought up after reading your poem.
Too good!
heyloworld: Thank you for reading & those are wonderful lines u came up with...
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