Tuesday, April 19, 2011

A chance I deserve


Started to take things light,
Since last night.
Do u think I deserve this pain,
this bane?
A chance I deserve,
as love is what I preserve.
But I'm at the end of the road,
a flight I'm gonna board,
which will take me abroad,
far far away from you.

31 comments:

  1. I'm so glad I found your blog. I'm stopping by from the A to Z challenge and I look forward to reading more from you

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  2. @ Sylvia Ney: Thank you.. My pleasure..

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  3. @ Red Handed: Glad u liked it..:-)

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  4. Makes me think..short and nice!

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  5. @ Alcina: Thank u.. Wht u thinkin nw thn..?

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  6. wow... good one dude!!

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    RoHiT
    dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

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  7. That do we need to always harbor pain when we talk about loving??

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  8. @ Rohit: Thanks buddy..!
    @ Alcina: Hmmm.. Got it..

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  9. @ Jingle: Thank you for reading..:D

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  10. inaweblogisback: Thank you for stopping by.

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  11. Nicely written. I like the flow of this one.

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/

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  12. charleslmashburn: Thank you for the comment..

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  13. sometimes you just gotta get away... Well done!

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  14. krouth: thanks for the comment..

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  15. Relationship break up? Those are always tough!
    Nice work.

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  16. This is such as great blog and I found you from The Poetry Palace and glad that I stopped by here to read your thoughts and wonderful poems thanks for sharing
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/

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  17. Ann LeFlore: Thank you.. Means a lot..

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  18. The right decision taken.A life can be lived once and its good to move away. Glad to have stopped here from poetry palace and to have read such true ideas.

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  19. anjum artwriter: Thank you.. But, have never been in relationship before to do such things.. its just my thoughts..

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  20. Really lovely piece. Unfortunately I had to keep reloading the page and reading it in snippets as my laptop decided to hide the poem itself

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  21. The twenties girl: Thank you for the comment...

    disjointedrhymings : Thank you & sorry for the trouble u had while reading the blog..

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  22. Very good. Ends on a note of anticipation for a new adventure. Enjoyed reading.

    My entry: http://wp.me/s1LMFk-749

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  23. And as I board my flight,
    at the end of my road,
    Stands a sun,still bright as day,
    perhaps,I'll meld into it,
    For in death i could be finally bright,
    With joy,and sad not in slight.

    These are some lines i thought up after reading your poem.
    Too good!

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  24. heyloworld: Thank you for reading & those are wonderful lines u came up with...

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