Sunday, May 2, 2010

Missing You


So long has it been,
Since I met you gal, wanna
See that face of yours, smile
That makes me forget all the, things
In the world.

I'm missing you oh baby.
So long has it been
I'm missing you oh baby.
Since I met you gal, wanna
I'm missing you oh baby.
See that face of yours, smile
I'm missing you oh baby.
That makes me forget all the, things
In the world.

Missing that, gentle
Touch of yours, which
Makes me shudder.
I think I'm gonna,
Burst out from, the
Feeling Of Loneliness.


Remember, how you make
Me shy. Its Just you, that
I want baby.
That's the reason, I'm
Singing this song. Understand,
What's going through my,
Heart right now.

Note: This is my personal fav one.

6 comments:

  1. Good one buddy... Liked it :D..
    Your poems would sound/look much better if you'd cut down on the number of commas and repetitive sentences.
    One thing's for sure.. your heart's running at an insane pace.. thanks to whoever it is :P
    --
    RoHiT
    dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

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  2. Thnx buddy.. btw, I hav started writing the same sentences again as I'm thinking from the singers point of view..:P wil cut down, if its too lengthy..;)

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  3. offfffooooooooooo... kavi! :P :P

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  4. Aww...the miss you missing would be totally and surely in love with your missing style :)

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  5. @ Alcina: Wish tht would b d case.. But alas, its not..

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