Sunday, September 26, 2010
Choke Choke
Choke Choke Choke,
Tht's hw my heart goes,
Whn u r not around, feels
Lik my wind pipe is cut down.
Whneve u called me mama, I came
Running down even though
I was in pyjama.
You know hw much I luv u, n
U knw, I wn't even drem
To hurt u. But its, the
Other case around.
My frnz ask me why I can't just walk
away from you & spend,
some time with them.
It hurts when u compare me, wit
Ur ex whom I want to Axe.
Choke Choke Chkoe,
Tht's hw my heart goes,
Whn u r not around, feels
Lik my wind pipe is cut down.
Note: This is my first try in hip-hop, lemme knw wht u guys think of it.
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I am pretty sure this was aimed at peaches.. Nice poem.. I see a poetic edge sprouting inside of you :D
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RoHiT...:-)
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Hahaha.. man, its not a't peaches... she is just a baby & hw can she have an Ex..? It's just a song man.. thnx 4 d compliment though..:D
ReplyDeleteHahaha...enjoyed from the beginning till the end..was full of innocent love..
ReplyDelete@ Alcina: :-D
ReplyDeleteAn interesting contribution to the potluck :) Enjoy!
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@ lynnaima : Thnx..:D
ReplyDeletefun one.
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interesting!
ReplyDeleteI liked this!
@ Jingle: thanks for reading..:D
ReplyDelete@ Mia: Thank you..!
nice.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
ReplyDelete@ fiveloaf: Thank you..
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