Thursday, March 17, 2011

Painful..

It's a rainy day, The weather is not so wonderful, Let's light the fire, so that it can be delightful. There is no sign of stopping, Looks as if the sky is weeping. Might be as we have hurt mother nature & it's,very painful. Maybe she is mourning, of loss of her planting. We have dug her heart, So deep just for mining. Its a rainy day, The weather is not so wonderful, Let's light the fire, so that it can be delightful.
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32 comments:

  1. rohit IyerMarch 18, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    ohoooo.. kiraaaak.. :D..
    Looking forward to reading more such poems from you... ;)

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    RoHiT
    dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

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  2. Raghavendra MuttMarch 18, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    Thanks man..:D will do..:D

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  3. MaggieMarch 24, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    Poor Earth. We certainly do abuse her.

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  4. Raghavendra MuttMarch 24, 2011 at 4:08 PM

    @ Thingy: Yes we do. I'm trying my best not to, but still cannot help sometimes. Thanks for reading though..

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  5. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 24, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    light the fire
    to fulfill your desire,

    fun sentiments, no fears for rain.
    no room for pain...

    welcome to poets rally...

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  6. Raghavendra MuttMarch 24, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    @ Promising Poets: Thank you.. Nice lines..

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  7. AnonymousMarch 24, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    Very nice and beautifully sad.

    ~Queenly

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  8. Raghavendra MuttMarch 24, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    @ Queenly: Thank you..:)

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  9. AlcinaMarch 24, 2011 at 9:00 PM

    A nice message spread by the poem..Nicely penned down!

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  10. Raghavendra MuttMarch 24, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    @ Alcina: Thanks, means a lot..:D

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  11. AnonymousMarch 25, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    Wonderfully done!

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  12. Raghavendra MuttMarch 25, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    @ thoughtsnotlost: Thank you..:D

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  13. AnonymousMarch 26, 2011 at 6:11 AM

    Interesting, hopefully fire a metaphor for physical fire and not burning bush then mother nature would really never stop weeping. Enjoy the rally!

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  14. Raghavendra MuttMarch 26, 2011 at 8:02 AM

    @ Lynnaima: u guessed it rite..:-) thnx 4 readin though..

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 26, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    lovely expression over the sad side of nature/life.

    cheers.

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  16. AnonymousMarch 26, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    wow. yes she is hurting, :( we jjust try to love her as best as we humans can...

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  17. AnonymousMarch 26, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    "May be she is mourning,
    of loss of her planting.
    We have dug her heart,
    So deep just for mining."

    Extreme depth to these lines...the poem is poignantly beautiful.

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  18. AnonymousMarch 26, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    I'd definitely like to hear this put to music.

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  19. Raghavendra MuttMarch 26, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    @ Jingle: Thank you n its true..
    @ Lunawitch15: We need to try even more.. Btw, Luna witch does tht mean u r a big fan of Har Potter books..? Anywayz, Thnx 4 readin..:-D
    @ 1Meremortal: Thank you 4 readin..:-D
    @ Sparrowsong: If you putt this one 2 music, then its my pleasure..:-D

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  20. AnonymousMarch 26, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    Sad but beautiful. :')

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  21. Raghavendra MuttMarch 26, 2011 at 9:57 PM

    @ Argentpoet: Thank you..:-)

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  22. Vinay Leo R.March 27, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    well expressed.. Nature does seem to weep a lot, considering we don't treat her right often..

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  23. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM

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  24. keerthiMarch 28, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    simply superb!

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  25. Raghavendra MuttMarch 28, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    @ Jingle (All): Thank you..:D
    @ Dishilicious: Thanks..:D
    @ Keerthi: Thank you..:D

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  26. Raghavendra MuttMarch 28, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    @ Vinay: Thank you..:D

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  27. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    We have dug her heart,
    So deep just for mining.

    Dig deeper is what applies in such cases. Nice write! (:

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  28. AnonymousMarch 29, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    I like the contrast of the first and fourth stanza with the 2nd and 3rd verse.It's like on one hand, we know we should be conserving nature but on the other hand, we are still destroying our environment for our own needs...
    The irony just hit me in the face when I read the last bit..
    Keep up the work! :)

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  29. Raghavendra MuttMarch 29, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    @ Clariice: Thank you for the comment.. Will do..

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  30. Paulog30March 30, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    Pure emotion! Good write!

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  31. Raghavendra MuttMarch 30, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    @ Buddha3074: Thank you..

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  32. AnonymousAugust 28, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    A somber mood you create with this. It is so very well considered, to think of the rain as a possible sign of nature hurting. And some of the things we do to sustain ourselves, even on the very level of planting, do disturb the natural balance in some way.

    Oh, if only simple, respectful planting were the limit of the hurts we inflict upon nature, we would not be so guilty. . .

    Nice work.

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    http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/08/22/landing-like-a-cat/

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